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I’m trying to tone down a bit on the impossible breast sizes a bit, you can have girls who are bigger but they should be for special occasions; cowgirls, 7 foot tall amazons… aliens… I don’t know…
Adama can you change "I'm sure you won't." to "I'm sure you will."
Also change "least problems arise" to "least more complications arise".
Fixed. And "least" should be "lest" in that sentence, but I didn't presume to correct it.