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Wow!
Ok, must take a deep breath after this one. Differences aside, this whole chapter sounded a lot Lovecraftian! If wasn't for the previous chapter where we find Tina already chained, if the chapter had started with her just finding Roxxy at a club, followed by her narrative, then closing with Tina leaving it, then trying to forget the experience she just had... whoa... it's amazing. What you did here was amazing - I'm a huge fan of smut stories, and stories with this theme... but the structure, and the last feeling on Tina's point of view - like for a moment she glimpsed a disturbing, bizarr world underneath ours. Five stars for this chapter.
Don't stop now! I thought I'd just be bursting at the seems to get back to the story, but I'm in complete suspense right now!
No plans to stop. There is more of Tina's story coming and she's gonna have a rough road ahead. I posted what I had finished so far because people had asked for more.
I don't usually like to post the Interludes a little at a time, but this one is turning out to be huge. So, I figured I would post what I have while I work on more.
Thank you! A great new road to travel down with a promise of more on the way. What more could we ask for? :o)