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Ficfactor
Sun Jan 15 01:52:37 2012

Way to capture just how Juvia's abilities could play into her being on the receiving end of a sadist's attentions, rarther than being the aggressor as in the original. You came up with a crazy awesome scene (thoroughly well executed) for the three involving her abilities that I had never even considered.

And imagine, I thought in the previous episode that Taka had already fucked Juvia's head.

What I love about this whole scenario is that as warped as it is, it doesn't require messing around with the FT universe to fit in. You get the impression (and are meant to, imo) in the original that this is just the sort of thing Vidaldus would have had in mind after this fight.

Taka's power slide was GLORIOUS. Almost as amazing as his magnificent instrument (lol).

I'm really glad you progressed how the trio are going to interact with the awesome chapter. I'd actually written a couple of episodes worth of story since the last one, but my muse is a fickle beast, and I'd written about events I'm planning to happen after this scene. (You've nodded in that direction with your fifth option.)

And bloody hell, even I didn't imagine Succubus Lucy being that sadistic! Massive props.


Cross C
Sun Jan 15 22:12:09 2012

I'm glad you liked it. Wasn't sure if I was going too far with Juvia's waterness. It did seem to fit their new personas.... Thanks for the in depth reaction! Looking forward to where you're taking it next.