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Chrome Dragoon and biodaemon2, you two have created a hot event in the Hermpire series. The progression and transition from clean to infected, lusty herms is great. One suggestion I have would be to pay attention to tense changes, as there seem to be a lot of past/present shifts in mid-paragraph. Even with those grammatical glitches, the scene is exciting to read and I hope you decide to continue it or extend one of the other Hermpire branches.