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Hm…nice. The aura thing was a great touch. Though I do kind of wish you'd made Shampoo's next wish a separate option, since it makes it harder to figure out how to build off of this one. Except maybe for the "didn't notice the changes" option. It's not that the others aren't interesting ideas, but they're...restrictive, I guess.
Either he still cares about Akane but doesn't see that girl as Akane, or he doesn't care about Akane but still cares about the girl who's with him. So either way, there's a disconnect between herself and Ranma's ability to identify her as Akane. Right? That seems like it would get awfully complicated awfully fast. So the choice where he doesn't notice that she's changed seems to have the most ways to proceed.
But perhaps I'm not looking at it the right way.
No, you make a fair point about the limits of the wish.
Adama, would you please remove the last bit of my post so it just notes Shampoo making a wish and then change the first four options, if possible, to the following:
1 -Shampoo makes a wish to change herself.
2 - Shampoo makes a wish to change Ranma
3 - Shampoo makes a wish to change Akane again.
4 - Shampoo either makes a wish about a fourth person or just stops mid-sentence and rests.
Thanks in advance.
Also Adama, if you please change
"Ranma gaze the comment a passing glance"
to
"Ranma gave the comment a passing glance"
thanks that that as well.
Fixed. If I didn't get it right let me know, I saved a copy of the original episode.
Did you mean to leave the part about which wish she made? Or was it basically supposed to end with "Shampoo wish…"? Because otherwise, it doesn't really make it particularly less restrictive. There are only so many ways to interpret that wish, and you did cover most of them.
(I guess it could also be that he could no longer see nor hear nor feel Akane at all…there was a story once where Shampoo did something to Ranma with exactly that effect. Or maybe he would forget Akane existed entirely, so he'd have no reason to notice her. Or any either of those or any of the previously discussed effects, but extended to everyone.)
I think I'll still go with Ranma not noticing she's different, at least among those. But maybe also that no one notices she's different?
You have a point; I've removed more of that last sentence. If you disagree Lord Byron, let me know.
It's fine. Thanks for the editing.
Sorry, Adama I should have been clearer that "you" meant Lord Byron. But I guess it worked out either way.