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"Ron uses the Master Phone as soon as possible..."
Again is it Ron or now Shego, who has the phone?
Shego has the phone, without knowledge of what it is.
It's up to you the author, if she uses it in whatever reason? Or just keeps it away from Ron from about to use it and still thinks it’s a phone or whatever you choose it to be?
Adama, sorry to bother you for the millionth time for the millionth screw-up, but can you change that I just noticed...
{Bachelors get in here} into {Butler get in here}
Fixed.