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Quite well done. I look forward to her reaction, regardless of what it might be.
I do have the next part in mind already, but I didn't want to cut off anyone from taking it in their own direction. I'm intending for this to be set pre-manga, and the reaction should be rather amusing. Will probably post next part in this thread next week, give people time to do something with it.