It was so dark, Sharon and Charmy were having a hard time seeing. They looked at the switch. What would happed if they pulled it. Sharon was a little scared because of all the weird trapdoors and spikes around here. She was glad Charmy was here. He seemed like a really nice friend. Finally, Charmy worked up enough courage to pull the switch and see what happens.
"Well, if we don't try pulling it we could wind up stuck in here. I'll pull it and see what happens." And Charmy grabbed the switch with both his hands and pulled on it.
But he couldn't make it work…
"I think it's stuck." Charmy's antenna drooped a little because he was disappointed.
Sharon wasn't going to give up so quickly though. She got beside Charmy and said, "Here, let me help. I'll pull on it too. I'm sure together we can make it work."
Charmy raised his antenna at Sharon. She was a pretty surprising bee! He giggled a little, "Gee. Thank you, Sharon. What would I do with you? Haha." And he grabbed the switch and pulled it with her.
Nothing happened at first, but then Sharon and Charmy felt the stone in the wall moving.
Creeeeaaakk!!!
It wasn't a switch at all! It was a handle to a secret door, and it was coming open. With a little more work, Sharon and Charmy got it open, and then they were surprised at what they saw inside.
"Wow. Charmy, this really IS a weird place."
Author's note:
Hi Mello! I just wanted to let you know that I really like what you have written. You are a VERY good writer, and I enjoyed everything you wrote. Thank you for sharing your characters and story with us. It doesn't matter where it came from. The only thing that matters is that you are writing what you LIKE to write, and that it comes from you. I'm glad that you let us keep writing the Charmy character, and I promise that I won't ever write anything bad about him. I really wish that you could stay and write some more, but I know that this is not a good place for you. It really makes me sad that we can't have more people like you here to write with. It would make the stories SO much more fun to write. Sometimes I get really tired of all the sick things that are written here. I think some people don't really CARE about the characters that they are writing about.
Also, I don't know if you know it or not, but I have been praising your writing on The Plume at the BE Archive, and I've been telling everybody to come and read your story and hopefully add to it too. You can see the message at http://www.bearchive.com/~forum/cgi-bin/Ultimate.cgi Just click on "The Plume." Oh, and if you want to send me an e-mail it's leviathan_25@hotmail.com I'd really like that.
See ya later!
Wed Jun 23 22:53:42 1999
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